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How to Write a Mob Screenplay


The workings of the criminal underworld have long fascinated those who live quiet, law-abiding lives, and they provide compelling fodder for novelists, playwrights and screenwriters. The adage about "write what you know," however, presents obvious problems if you typically don't consort with members of the Mafia, bosses of South American drug cartels and cold-blooded hit men. Fortunately, there's a bounty of resources if you want to write a mob genre plot with plausible characters that walk the walk, talk the talk and pack the right heat.

The Mob in Books, Film and Television

Study novels such as Mario Puzo's "The Godfather" and Peter Mass' "Serpico," movies such as "Once Upon a Time in America" and "The Road to Perdition," and TV series such as "The Untouchables," "Mobsters," and "The Sopranos." These will give you a feel for the historical, cultural and sociological context of why and how mobsters operate within their organizations and community. "The Mafia Manager: A Guide to the Corporate Machiavelli," an insider view by the anonymous "V," explains the hierarchical operations of managing friends and enemies, staying cognizant of potential threats and rewarding loyalty. All of these are crucial elements to weaving an authentic mob genre story.

Nonfiction vs. Fiction
Stars Kelly Macdonald and Steve Buscemi at the Season 4 premiere of

Determine whether your mob genre story will be based on real gangsters such as Al Capone and Bugsy Siegel or whether it will be a fictionalized tableau such as "Boardwalk Empire," which uses the historical backdrop of Prohibition-era crime, prostitution and bootlegging. Although fiction gives you more latitude in storytelling, accuracy is still critical in describing locations and clothing as well as emulating mobster slang and depicting legal and judicial proceedings. Since underworld crime exists worldwide, also consider locales outside of the U.S., such as Mexico, Central and South America, China and Russia.

Heroes and Villains

Identify who will be the protagonist and antagonist in your story and establish credible motivations, backstories and value systems that respectively make them good or bad. Consider making your lead character a woman. Giovanni Fiandaca's "Women and the Mafia: Female Roles in Organized Crime Structures" illustrates how women are as effective in leadership roles as they are in auxiliary positions within the mob world. Introduce twists in which the mobster is more likable than the cop doggedly pursuing him. Borrow a page from Shakespeare and introduce characters that aren't everything they seem on the surface.

Conflict and Consequences

Develop a sustainable conflict. Both the protagonist and the antagonist must have something at stake for which they will take whatever risk is presented. For example, the mob character is honor-bound to avenge a death while the cop is desperate for a promotion that can only be achieved by bringing the mob character down. Ideally the protagonist should have an Achilles heel. This is often a loved one, an example of this being Sullivan's young son, Michael," in "The Road to Perdition." While it's permissible to have subplots in a mob genre story, their existence should be to either add complications to the core conflict or to help resolve it by the story's end.

About the Author

Ghostwriter and film consultant Christina Hamlett has written professionally since 1970. Her credits include many books, plays, optioned features, articles and interviews. Publishers include HarperCollins, Michael Wiese Productions, "PLAYS," "Writer's Digest" and "The Writer." She holds a B.A. in communications (emphasis on audience analysis and message design) from California State University, Sacramento. She also travels extensively and is a gourmet chef.

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